These lyrics alright to write with a girl?

Chorus: I tried to apologize before i lost it, drew you ah line and tole u not to cross it, you did now look where we are now, weve come to far for you to go n throw in tha towel, first verse: how you gonna say you love me when you dont? How you gonna say im everything thatchu want? You lied, about everything you said, i tried, but lies where tha only thing i was fed, theres no way me n you will be like we use to-be, cuz ill neva forget how used me, i approached you in a different way words cant describe, you betta be thankful that you can say your alive, because if it was for me you wouldnt be breathin, think about that sh-- next time you say your leavin- Chorus- Fu-- it, theres no way we could get back together, "you sunk the relation-ship forever", ill make you hate me till you dont thnk ah me ever, this is ah fu--in battle youll neva be able to win, were fallen back into tha same stupid sh-- again,